Dear Cain,
Issue 222… not your best issue. Both stories were pretty weak.
For example, In Vengeange is Mine, you misspelled the title: v-e-n-g-e-a-n-C-e! From there the story just continues downhill.
The Night of the Teddy Bear is only slightly better. It was off to a good start. I was really liking the character of Casper Twinge. It was building up to something cool. But then, the ending of the story seems like it came about because you hit your target page count.
Tragically, your faithful reader,
Jeff King
Pittsburgh, PA
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